My name is Bill. I am in grade five. I have three brothers and two cats. I also have lots of fish. I love tacos. I have a Dell laptop, I love spiders they are so cool. Red backs look the coolest.
I like computers because you can do so much on them. You go on lot more games. I like going on my bike. I go to the church. I ride in the car park. And I ride to the park with my bother. It’s so fun. I like going to the beach. (The ones with waves)
I love origami. It’s so fun. I have made a paper crane. And a lady bug. And much more. I don’t like home work. But you can learn more from doing homework. I like making star boxes it fun. Star boxes looked really hard to make but they are really easy. Origami is so fun.
My oldest brother put a Daddy Long Legs on my hand. It looked directly into my eyes. It was creepy. I love spiders. I also love snakes. I went camping. And a snake was crossing the path way. It looked so cool I forgot what snake it was.
Hi Bill,
I liked the way you told us a lot of information about you and it didn’t get boring. You just forgot the R in brother in the 6st line and one part didn’t really make sense but it was a very good story.
Good job Bill.
From Matthias
Hi Bill,
Great Job and now I know lots more about you and your piece was very funny.Maybe just fix up the word bother[is it meant to be brother].Otherwise fantastic job!
Well Done
Amelia