I’ve had the mirror for 30 years now and then it does this. Let me start from the start. I was checking the mirror with my friend to see if there were any cracks. I left the room for about 5 minutes and when I got back my friend was nowhere to be seen and I swear that the mirror had gotten bigger. I called another friend to come over and I left him alone in the room. When I got back he was also gone and the mirror was getting bigger and then it sucked m…
bill2012
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I thought your story was good and it had good little bit of scare which didn’t scare me.
Bryce out.;
Exelent
Good effort I wonder what the last word was I am exited to read more of your posts.
I liked the way your character’s last word was cut short, presumably as they got sucked into that very scary mirror! A few more adjectives would have made this story even better, try experimenting with some creative descriptions to draw your reader into the action.
Fiona (Team 100WC)
We really liked it and we wish you a merry christmas keep up the good work.